mrb 11 Sep 07: The connection of the omni, vege, vegan material to entertaining only starts to be made on the second page. Sooner would be better I think. In fact it might be best to open with the So if you're having company over, you can inquire and hope your prospective guest will be forthcoming but not voluble. and then re-cast the rest of the discussion as background material for understanding what your prospective guest might say. I had to read this sentence twice, because the "I … we" surprised me: My husband and I eat quasi-vegan two nights a week and I often eat vegan during the day because we think it's healthful. I am not sure how to interpret things like … vegan "gelatin" … and … mad cow disease, high intensity farming, travel costs … I guess these are notes to yourself? Bell peppers with olive oil … yum! I wonder how a tiny bit of Szechwan pepper would go with that? Not for the potluck of course.